Meral Bakırcı
Second Draft- Division Essay
03.04.2014
OUTLINE
Thesis Statement: In our country,
weddings are celebrated three different places: at the rural area, at the
wedding halls, and at homes in villages.
Body
Paragraph 1
Topic: Generally,
rich and famous people prefer to celebrate their weddings at the rural area.
1.0: no boiler and ready foods
2.0: bow-tied waiters and chairs with
white linens and big ribbons
3.0: a few children
4.0: no song and an orchestra for
only rhythm
5.0: green environment and clean air
6.0: a crown made of wildflowers
7.0: fairytale image
Body Paragraph 2
Topic: Middle class people prefer to
celebrate their weddings at the wedding halls.
1.0: hall wedding as a common type
2.0: renting wedding halls before
3.0: going to wedding hall before to
applaud
4.0: dancing
5.0: beginning to play guests
6.0: being worn jewelries
7.0: orchestra and service
8.0: being offered cake, soft drinks,
and nuts
9.0: family photos
Body Paragraph 3
Topic: People in villages generally
celebrate their weddings at home no matter how rich or poor they are because
their customs and traditions are reflected in village weddings with the best
way.
1.0: customs and traditions
1.1: being played drums and flutes
2.0: being crowded and a lot of
children
3.0: meals such as pies, desserts…
4.0: having traditional play
5.0: halay as a common play
6.0: the mutual plays
Conclusion Paragraph
WEDDINGS IN OUR COUNTRY
Weddings are among the ceremonies
which express the happiness of the people in Turkish culture like all the world
cultures no matter where it happens. There are a lot of functions of weddings.
They help people to have fun, provide them a chat environment, reinforce
solidarity, and enrich life. In addition to these good functions, where we
celebrate the wedding is important for people as they marry once. In our
country, weddings are celebrated three different places: at the rural area, at
the wedding halls, and at homes in villages.
Generally, rich and famous people
prefer to celebrate their weddings at the rural area. There is no boiler in
country weddings and meals come from the kitchen readily. Bow-tied waiters serve
and chairs are dressed with white linens and big ribbons. There are a few
children running around bride and groom and tables. There is no song, orchestra
only keep the rhythm. Everywhere is so green and there are clean air and
wildflowers. Bride wears a crown made of wildflowers which is epitome of
country wedding. This type of wedding has a fairytale image.
Middle class people prefer to
celebrate their weddings at the wedding halls. Hall wedding is the most common
wedding type in our country. People rent wedding halls for one evening or
afternoon several months in advance. Relatives of bride and groom, guests come
to wedding hall before the time of wedding to welcome bride and groom with
applause. Bride and groom come to scene and dance for a while. When the bride
and groom sit, the guests play what they want to play. Jewelries of the sides
of the girl and boy are worn to bride by announcements. There is an orchestra and
refreshments are served by waiters. Especially cake and soft drinks are offered
to guests and it is also common to offer nuts to guests. Finally, family photos
are taken.
People in villages generally
celebrate their weddings at home no matter how rich or poor they are because
their customs and traditions are reflected in village weddings with the best
way. There are a lot of customs and traditions. For example; drum and flutes
are played in village weddings but it isn’t suitable to be played drums and
flutes in country wedding. Village wedding is so crowded and there are a lot of
children running around bride and groom. In terms of food, their menu is so
crowded: there are pies, desserts, fruits, and meats. Plays of village weddings
differ from region to region and every region has a unique and traditional
play. However, halay is played in most village weddings. Except for halay, the mutual plays which our women
and men play together or separately are played in most village weddings commonly.
Our weddings are the most beautiful
examples which reflect our culture. We have three types wedding and they are
country wedding, hall wedding, and village wedding. Although we have three
types of wedding, we can reflect our culture in village wedding highly but in
our country the most common wedding type is hall wedding. It means that we are
forgetting our cultural values.