23 Nisan 2014 Çarşamba

Cause-Effect Essay 2- First Draft


Meral Bakırcı

Cause-Effect Essay 2

 

Internet is an incredible network which connects not only millions of computers but also thousands of social groups. We are a part of elements which ensures functioning of this network. Since the first day internet came to the Turkey, Turkey has changed and developed so much. So, internet users, we had to keep up with these alterations and developments. Nowadays, people meet with computer and internet from young ages and they use internet and computer for different aims such as joy, homework intensively. While using the internet, people can take advantage from it, at the same time; they can take disadvantage from it. Whether they take advantage or disadvantage from it is related to which aims they use the internet. Internet has a lot of effects on people’s life, but it has significant influences on especially people’s social life, psychology, and health.

Firstly, internet affects people’s social life on a large scale. People can use internet for different aims. It offers to people unlimited written and visual content. So, people prefer to read news and view different sources on internet instead of to read newspaper to be able to reach the most accurate information. Nowadays, it is so popular to use internet for shopping. The rising product variety of websites which is related to online-shopping makes it attractive to people. Also people can use it for communication. There are some social networks such as Twitter and Facebook used worldwide. The use of these social networks causes people both to socialize and not to socialize. People who use the social networks consciously take advantage of them. Unconscious users don’t take advantage of them. There are a lot of bad and good effects of internet on our life. One of the good effects is that with beginning to be used internet technology in utilities, e-government concept came out. With this e-government implementation, the efficiency of public sector increased on a large scale. One of the bad effects is that playing game so much is a big time loss; it steals our time.

Secondly, internet generally affects people’s psychology badly but it is generally not always. It can’t be thought that there is a branch which doesn’t reflect people’s psychology. The color of dress we wear, the smell of perfume we use, and our bed’s linen are options of our psychology. Briefly, our psychology is affected by everything easily and can affect our all decisions. With internet, people can reach information easily and fast, search what comes to their mind, make new friends, and express their thoughts freely, but sometimes people have to express them with short texts. These all form a different psychology on people. If people don’t have opportunities to do these, they may feel depressed and unhappy. As long as we use the internet according to its aim and we use it in dose, it gives us healthy results. Thanks to internet, we can tell the things we are shy and timid about. Internet may also turn into a psychological disorder because of the time are passed at the beginning of internet. For example, people spend so much time by playing games at the beginning of internet and computer and they can be addicted to game.

Thirdly, internet affects people’s health both directly and indirectly. Today, one hand, internet makes our life easier and we can do our works and task s while sitting at home through internet. On the other hand, most of us are sitting at the beginning of the computer and surfing on the internet. We don’t walk even in short distances and we are phoning or talking on the internet instead of walking. We are paying our bills on internet, doing our shopping on internet. These lead to inactivity. We aren’t aware of this inactivity but it is so serious problem which led to disorders such as headache, backache, eyestrain, and obesity. Movement is so important for our health and human body needs to move to be healthy. That people surf on internet during long hours and that the inactivity blocks functioning our metabolism regularly prevent from moving.  That our metabolism doesn’t work regularly damages our health.

To sum up, there are pros and cons of using internet. Sometimes we can take advantage and sometimes disadvantage from using internet. Which aims do we use the internet and how long do we use the internet? These are important things to take advantage from it. Internet offers us easy ways to do our works but how we will do this work is our decision. Internet affects our lifestyle, speech, relationship, culture, morality, and eating and sleeping habits but it has noticeable effects on people’s social life, psychology, and health. As a result, internet affects our life willingly or unwillingly so, we try to use good features of internet not bad features.

17 Nisan 2014 Perşembe

cause-effect essay


CAUSE-EFFECT ESSAY

MERAL BAKIRCI

 

THE EFFECTS OF DIVORCE ON CHILDREN

Divorce is a difficult process for both children and father-mother. For children, divorcing father and mother stressful, complex, and upsetting situation. No matter how old children are, they may worry about how they continue their life after divorce. At the same time, children may get angry with their family because of divorce. For children, even if their families don’t fulfill their task, divorce means that collapsing a system which children are protected and looked after. The effects of divorce on children differ according to child and family structure. There are a lot of effects of divorce on children such as crying, nervousness, stress, being withdrawn, avoiding having sexual relation, anger, nightmares, restlessness, accusing you, sleeping and eating disorder, and problems with school. There are some terms which these effects are seen on children: babyhood, childhood, and adolescence.

The first term is babyhood. If child is in babyhood when his or her father and mother divorce, the child loses trust feeling which the most important feature is in this period. The basis trust feeling is one of the first things which the baby learns. It provides forming the trust feeling being provided baby’s physical requirements, being feed regularly. But in the divorce situation, the baby becomes anxious and worried about his or her future. Another situation is that the baby can perceive dispute and tension at home but they can’t understand that the cause of this dispute and tension is divorce. This dispute and tension create some problems on babies which are nervousness, sleeping and eating disorder, diarrhea, and constipation.

The second term is childhood. Personality features improves highly n this period. Divorcing father and mother affects child’s personality. Even if children don’t understand the reason of divorce, they are aware of not staying their father and mother at the same house. As a reaction of divorce, children adhere to person who they stay with, wait more interest, behave like a baby. Even if they don’t understand why their father and mother divorce, they are aware of their parent’s anger and unhappiness. As a result of divorce, children may have nightmares; children may have dense sorrow and loss feeling. Also they may think that ‘if they were well-behaved, their father and mother wouldn’t divorce.’ This thought leads to accuse themselves.

The last term is adolescence. Adolescence is both physical and mental maturity process for a child. Even if adolescents understand the situation, they don’t accept separation or divorce mostly. They are extremely angry with their parents and they may even attempt to use violence against their parents. They may lose their trust of relations including their future marriage. Their respect of themselves may reduce and they may think of not being loved. They feel that they are betrayed and refused, and they are disappointed. They may suffer from depression, they may be withdrawn, and they often use suicide as a threat. Some behavior disorder can be seen in adolescents such as stealing something, not going to school, using cigarette-alcohol, and having sexual relations. There are also some adolescents who show more suitable behaviors as they think that behavior differences save marriage.

To sum up, divorce creates different effects on children in different periods. Father and mother may divorce and it is an extremely normal situation nowadays. But parents should protect and support their children like before as far as they make. Parents should follow where their child is, with who their child is, and what their child does. Before parents’ divorce, they should talk their child about divorce and learn their child’s thought. In my opinion, if there is a child, parents should think about divorce twice and if they want to divorce insistently while there is a child, they should try to decrease these effects.

 

 

 

4 Nisan 2014 Cuma

Division Essay- Second Draft


Meral Bakırcı

Second Draft- Division Essay

03.04.2014

 

OUTLINE

Thesis Statement: In our country, weddings are celebrated three different places: at the rural area, at the wedding halls, and at homes in villages.

Body Paragraph 1

Topic: Generally, rich and famous people prefer to celebrate their weddings at the rural area.

1.0: no boiler and ready foods

2.0: bow-tied waiters and chairs with white linens and big ribbons

3.0: a few children

4.0: no song and an orchestra for only rhythm

5.0: green environment and clean air

6.0: a crown made of wildflowers

7.0: fairytale image

                                                          Body Paragraph 2

Topic: Middle class people prefer to celebrate their weddings at the wedding halls.

1.0: hall wedding as a common type

2.0: renting wedding halls before

3.0: going to wedding hall before to applaud

4.0: dancing

5.0: beginning to play guests

6.0: being worn jewelries

7.0: orchestra and service

8.0: being offered cake, soft drinks, and nuts

9.0: family photos

                                                          Body Paragraph 3

Topic: People in villages generally celebrate their weddings at home no matter how rich or poor they are because their customs and traditions are reflected in village weddings with the best way.

1.0: customs and traditions

1.1: being played drums and flutes

2.0: being crowded and a lot of children

3.0: meals such as pies, desserts…

4.0: having traditional play

5.0: halay as a common play

6.0: the mutual plays

        Conclusion Paragraph

WEDDINGS IN OUR COUNTRY

Weddings are among the ceremonies which express the happiness of the people in Turkish culture like all the world cultures no matter where it happens. There are a lot of functions of weddings. They help people to have fun, provide them a chat environment, reinforce solidarity, and enrich life. In addition to these good functions, where we celebrate the wedding is important for people as they marry once. In our country, weddings are celebrated three different places: at the rural area, at the wedding halls, and at homes in villages.

Generally, rich and famous people prefer to celebrate their weddings at the rural area. There is no boiler in country weddings and meals come from the kitchen readily. Bow-tied waiters serve and chairs are dressed with white linens and big ribbons. There are a few children running around bride and groom and tables. There is no song, orchestra only keep the rhythm. Everywhere is so green and there are clean air and wildflowers. Bride wears a crown made of wildflowers which is epitome of country wedding. This type of wedding has a fairytale image.

Middle class people prefer to celebrate their weddings at the wedding halls. Hall wedding is the most common wedding type in our country. People rent wedding halls for one evening or afternoon several months in advance. Relatives of bride and groom, guests come to wedding hall before the time of wedding to welcome bride and groom with applause. Bride and groom come to scene and dance for a while. When the bride and groom sit, the guests play what they want to play. Jewelries of the sides of the girl and boy are worn to bride by announcements. There is an orchestra and refreshments are served by waiters. Especially cake and soft drinks are offered to guests and it is also common to offer nuts to guests. Finally, family photos are taken.

People in villages generally celebrate their weddings at home no matter how rich or poor they are because their customs and traditions are reflected in village weddings with the best way. There are a lot of customs and traditions. For example; drum and flutes are played in village weddings but it isn’t suitable to be played drums and flutes in country wedding. Village wedding is so crowded and there are a lot of children running around bride and groom. In terms of food, their menu is so crowded: there are pies, desserts, fruits, and meats. Plays of village weddings differ from region to region and every region has a unique and traditional play. However, halay is played in most village weddings. Except for halay, the mutual plays which our women and men play together or separately are played in most village weddings commonly.

Our weddings are the most beautiful examples which reflect our culture. We have three types wedding and they are country wedding, hall wedding, and village wedding. Although we have three types of wedding, we can reflect our culture in village wedding highly but in our country the most common wedding type is hall wedding. It means that we are forgetting our cultural values.