Argumentative Essay 2
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USING ELECTRONIC BOOK IN SCHOOLS
What is your choice tablet or
book? There will always be an argument whether electronic book is useful for
students or not. This argument will not end because some people think of bad
features of the electronic book while some people think of good feature of
using the electronic book. We are in the technology era. As our social life and
daily life are affected by technological developments, our education system is
affected by technological developments. As we have seen, we started to use
electronic books last year in schools. There are three major benefits of using
electronic book in schools: it is a useful device for permanent and easy
learning, it is very functional device, and it is a portable device.
The first benefit of using the
tablet is that it provides students permanent and easy learning. While we are
using book, we are also taking notes at some important points and we miss some
points, so we cannot understand what the teacher tells us. For example, our
teacher has a slide. We do not have to take notes as we can take it in a
digital format with the tablet. It is so useful device for students who are
tired of writing and typing during lectures and presentations. Because tablet
provides us the opportunity of recording lecture and with these records, we can
review our lesson at home at any time. It is not only a book but also a
notebook. We can take notes by using pen and paper in tablets, circle,
highlights, and underline especially important points. Another point is that it
is proven that 60 percent of students learn best and easily with visual-spatial
presentations. It is a high rate. Tablets offer students the opportunity of
using a lot of materials like graphs, charts, images, and videos. As a result, tablets
offer students much more materials to provide an effective learning.
The second benefit of using the
tablet is that it is very functional device. We can take record our lectures,
we can form our own videos related to our lessons with it. These functions
contribute our learning on a large scale. Tablet not only contributes our
learning but also provide communicating with people since it is designed to
contact with the internet. We can easily connect to the social media sites,
talk with our family and friends, research any subject, and read or watch the
latest news. Tablet provides students to access the information easily and
fast. Thanks to its internet connection, students can make search in any
subject for their lesson and look up in any word which they do not know or they
wonder. Tablets have a large memory and we can store a lot of information on a
tablet. We can store movies and novels inside it, so we can read novel or we can
watch movie whenever we want.
The third benefit of using the
tablet is that it is a portable device. We can bring it where we go, so we can
study lesson where we are in a classroom, at the library, at home, or at bus
station. This feature of tablet makes it the more preferred product and makes
it more common in society. Before tablet, students are carrying the heavy bags and
they are very tired. Tablet has all lesson sources inside it. As it is a
portable tool, it provides learning easily whenever we want and wherever we
are. For example, while we are travelling, we can study lesson, listen videos
from it, or read a book easily and comfortably not like a book. It is also
comfortable to use everywhere. We can use it with one hand easily. That it is a
portable device makes longer the learning process, so it should be used in
schools.
To sum up, as we have seen, we
can learn information from books by reading, taking notes, or seeing from
pictures but tablet offers us a lot of ways to learn. We can learn from tablets
writing, reading, watching, listening and tablets support the learning with
materials such as graphs and charts. So, tablets called electronic books should
be used in schools as they make our learning more permanent and easy, they have
a lot of functions, and they are used and taken anywhere and anytime easily.
1) As we have seen, we started to use electronic books last year (word order) in schools.
YanıtlaSil2)We can take notes by using pen and paper in tablets, circle, highlights, and underline especially important points. ---> parallel structure
3) Tablet not only (word order) contributes our learning but also provide communicating with people since it is designed to contact with the internet.
1-) What is your choice tablet or book? = It is not a proper beginning for an argumentative essay.
YanıtlaSil2-)There will always be an argument whether (article)electronic book is useful for students or not. (paragraph 1, line 1)
1) We can store movies and novels inside it, so we can read *novel or we can watch movie whenever we want.: Missing article.( 2. body paragraph)
YanıtlaSil2) We can bring it where we go, so we can study lesson where we are in a classroom, at the library, at home, or at *bus station. : missing article. (3. body paragraph)