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Comparison
and Contrast Essay
OUTLINE
Thesis Statement: However, there are a lot of
differences between letter as a communication tool and e-mail as a
communication way that we can compare.
Body
Paragraph 1
Topic
Sentence: Firstly, letter is one of the oldest communication tools.
1.0:
letter’s permanence and letter as a memory
2.0: slow
communication tool and the slowness of arriving letter
2.1:
teaching to be patient
3.0: long
texts
3.1: one or
more than papers
4.0: feeling
the letter with three senses
5.0: reading
and burning letter in different times
6.0:
necessities such as harmony, order, and grammar rules
6.1: taking
care of spelling rules
7.0: writing
about long processes
8.0: postman
and giving letters to post-office
8.1: making
logical decisions while giving letter to post-office
9.0: letter
song and letter’s traditional feature
10.0:
requirements such as paper, pencil to write letter
Conclusion Sentence: As a result, writing letter isn’t an
easy job and people generally write letters people they love and value.
Body
Paragraph 2
Topic
Sentence: Secondly, nowadays, e-mail is so popular communication way.
1.0: the
speed of sending e-mail
2.0:
mentioning only one topic in e-mails
3.0:
advertisement e-mails
3.1:
deleting these advertisement e-mails
4.0: unnecessary
harmony and order for e-mail
5.0: not
finding topic to talk about
6.0: not
taking care of grammar and spelling rules
7.0: writing
e-mail angrily and nervously because of easiness
8.0: not
requiring money and effort
9.0: not
permanent
10.0:
necessary things such as computer and internet
Conclusion Sentence: As a result, sending e-mail is an
easy job and e-mail doesn’t require so much rules.
Conclusion
Paragraph:
1.
Summarizing
2.
Recommending: To provide people to use letters more common, we should teach
children how to write letters correctly and inform about its merit in schools.
Letter and E-mail
Every human
needs to communicate other people to sustain life and nowadays, communication
is as important requirement as eating and drinking for people. People use
different ways to keep in touch each other. Two of them are letter and e-mail.
They are similar to each other. However, there are a lot of differences between
letter as a communication tool and e-mail as a communication way that we can
compare.
Firstly,
letter is one of the oldest communication tools. The most important feature of
letter is being permanent and letters are important and valuable memories for
people. On the other hand, letter is a slow communication tool, it takes one
day or more than one day to arrive the address we sent. So, it teaches people
to wait and be patient. Texts are generally long in letters and there are a lot
of things to write. So, papers may be more than one or two. It is also
important that we feel letter paper with three senses which are sense of sight,
sense of touch, and even sense of smell. While letter can be read repeatedly in
longing and separation times, it also can be burned in aversion times. There
are harmony and order in letters and it requires basic grammar rules. Even if
people don’t know grammar rules, people try to take care of spelling rules.
Long processes such as weeks, months, and even years are written thoroughly in
letters. There is also a postman in letters and preparing letters and giving
them post-office take to time. This time provide us to make more logical
decisions. Letters are traditional and we have even a song related to letter
which is ‘bak postacı geliyor selam veriyor’. There are effort and toil in letters they are necessary
paper, pencil, stamp, envelope, time, and money to be able to write and send a
letter. As a result, writing letter isn’t an easy job and people generally
write letters people they love and value.
Secondly,
nowadays, e-mail is so popular communication way. E-mail is so fast that it
takes only a few seconds to reach person we sent. People generally mention only
one subject in e-mails. Most of e-mails which are sent us are generally related
to advertisements. Sometimes, while we are deleting these advertisements, some
important e-mails which our relatives and friends send us may be overlooked and
deleted without being read. It isn’t necessary harmony and order for e-mails,
it is written like chatting. Even though the process or time which people talk
about is long, people don’t find something to write. So, this question comes
out ‘how are things with you?’ People don’t take care of grammar rules and
spelling rules in e-mails. Another point is that it may be written in an angry
and nervous mood as it is so fast and easy. There isn’t something concrete in
e-mails so, they aren’t permanent. Computer and internet are only necessary to
send an e-mail. As a result, sending e-mail is an easy job and e-mail doesn’t
require so much rules.
To sum up, as
the differences we see in letters and e-mails, e-mails are faster to send and
easier to write than letters. So, people use e-mails more than letters. We can
say that today letter isn’t almost used and most people don’t know even how to
be written letter. But it is something traditional, beautiful, and it is a
memory for us. To provide people to use letters more common, we should teach
children how to write letters correctly and inform about its merit in schools.
People send letters to people who they attach importance because it is believed
that letter is more important than the expensive gift you will buy and the
romantic dinner you will bring.
1) Every human needs to communicate(missing preposition) other people
YanıtlaSil2) communication is(you should write here a word so that you can use "as") as important requirement as eating and drinking for people.
3) letter is one of the oldest communication (tools) singular plural).
4) preparing letters and giving them (missing preposition)post-office take to time.
5) This time provide (sva) us to make more logical decisions
6) which is ‘bak postacı geliyor selam veriyor’.( you should write it in english)
7) they are (necessary)(this adj. is not used in this sentence you must use verb for example "require") paper, pencil, stamp, envelope, time, and money to be able to write and send a letter.
8) As a result, writing letter isn’t an easy job and people generally write letters (missing prep.)people they love and value.
Good Work.
All of your comments are useful and correct but I don't agree with you about sixth comment.I think that we should write it like original.
Sil-On the other hand, letter is a slow communication tool(,) it takes one day or more than one day to arrive the address we sent. (punctuation) It must be (;).
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