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March 7, 2014
Comparison
and Contrast Essay
THE LIVES OF MEN AND WOMEN IN MY COUNTRY
While human is
extremely important creature
in our world , why
does the importance which
is attached to
human change from
culture to culture according
to human’s gender?There
are a lot of
differences between the
lives of men and
women in my
country : the role
of women and
men in family ,
women’s and men’s
role in business , and men’s
and women’s literacy
rate.
The first
difference is men
and women’s roles
in a family.There
is so big
difference between their
roles.Men generally decide
about children’s life and think about their future more than
women.The arbiter in
family is generally
father.Women listen their husband
and respect their opinions.In my
country while women
have more rights
than men over
children , men have more
authority over children.Likewise boys
have more authority
than girls in
family when we
take into consideration their boys and
girls or sisters
and brothers.So , men have
more rights in
family.
The second
difference is business life.Generally men
work and men don’t
allow their wives
to work.Likewise fathers
don’t allow their
girls to work
as they observe
their family in
this wise.According to
men’s understanding in
my country , women look
after their children , clean house , and
cook dinner and women do them.Generally
they don’t work outside.This
understanding is also valid
for young girls.While
boys are working
even at young
age , girls’ working in
a factory or
somewhere else isn’t
tolerated and allowed.As
a result , men have
extremely active business
life , women are generally expected
to be housewife.
The last difference
is men and
women’s literacy.Generally men’s
literacy rate is higher than women as girls are doing housework while boys are sent to
school.Only some families
send their girls
to school, so only some women are literate.Boys and men do
what they want
to do.They are
quite free to
make their decisions.They may
go to the
school , work in a
factory or somewhere
else while women are
dealing with sewing
and embroidery instead
of going to
school.Girls help their mothers and then they are
married by their
parents.So , most of our women
don’t know reading
and writing.
To sum up , as people
give more importance
boys than girls , boys and men
are more lucky
and valuable in
my country because
of their liberty
of all decisions
while women aren’t
still completely independent
about their life.
OUTLİNE
Background Information : While human
is extremely important…
Thesis Statement : There are a lot of
differences…
I.First difference
is man and woman’s
roles in
a family.
A.Men
1.men’s free decisions
2.father in family as an arbitor
B.Women
1.woman’s respect and
obedience against her husband’s decisions
2.about men’s
authority over children
C.boys and girls
1.being more authoritative boys compared to girls in
family
Conclusion Sentence : So , men have
more rights in family.
II.Second difference is
business life
A.Men
1.can work where they want to
2. don’t allow
their wives and girls to
work
B.Women
1. look for
their children and
do housework
2.don’t work outside
C.Boys and girls
1.Boys work
where they want to work
but girl’s working
isn’t tolerated.
Conclusion Sentence : As a result ,
men have extremely active…
III.The last difference is man and
woman’s literacy
A.Men
1.
more literate
2.may
go to school or work in a factory or somewhere else
B.Women
1. quite less literate than men
2. deal with sewing and
embroidery instead of going to school
in addition to housework
C.Boys and girls
1.Boys are free to make their
decisions while girls are married by their parents.
Conclusion Sentence : So , most of
our women don’ t
know…
Conclusion Paragraph : To sum up ,
as people give
more importance boys
than girls….
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